this is a great read and very erotic. but also heartfelt, heartbreaking at times but it's so intriguing. you can't put it down. I loved this book. good job! on to the second book and I'm so excited!
I have only read up until CH 17, but the story is a bit inconsistent, perhaps it will get better as the author finds his path. The reason I say this come from examples such as hundreds of enemies marching towards our protagonist, then he defeats 50, then after it is mentioned he defeated 12 etc. the numbers are inconsistent and fluctuate. Our MC power levels are also weird. We learn in the beginning that he is at silver lvl 28 (close to lvl 29). Then we learn he has some master skill that lets him do more, or less as he chose. Nothing is explained and it seems like the author is more interested in just having the MC do whatever whenever without any consistency or logic behind it. I know that happens in other light novels as well and to some is a core of the story. However the way it is written here it kinda makes things meaningless, because what is the reason behind pages that explain stuff if none of it has any meaning and the MC will do 'whatever' without any rules or regulations behind it. I don't think I will be reading this one to the end.
Really loved reading this book but it would be even more enjoyable if the grammatical and spelling errors can be rectified!! Off to read the second book! Highly recommend reading this!
I was reading He open his eyes was not done reading I paid a total of 15.99 for this book now it didn’t come up some other book did if I can’t finish the book then refund my money
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