Mistress of The Finance King

I love the book so much. God! the characters are beautiful, the dialogue goes smoothly and I didn't witness any error. Good book dear!

Not that good. I picked it up because there were not many chapters and the reviews were good but I don't really liked the novel.Let's start from beginning,It is the story of Xu Ning, a guy with no backstory who transmigrates into the body of another Xu Ning with a broken and boring cheat.I will be dividing this novel into 2 parts the Mortal Arc which would be about first 200 chapters, and the Dao Realm Arc. The Mortal Arc is great, you have challanges ups and downs, meaningful relationships, family, friendship, clever fights, and more.The Dao Realm Arc however, gives you no challenges, MC will always level up before any difficulty, side character are thrown away once they are not needed, the pace of story increases rapidly, MC is having a breakthrough every 20 or less chapters, fights are basically MC overwhelming others with his superior strength. Let me give you an example of how bad the Dao Realm Arc gets, the only combat technique he learns throughout the Dao Realm is "Void Walk Beast Phantom" and it wasn't used for more that 5 chapters, all the previous technique before the Dao Realm are not used in Dao Realm.About the Ending,Ending sucks. The Final Boss guy has no stakes with the MC. Just a bad guy who wants to kill everyone for a petty reason and MC took up the duty to stop him. Also, the ending arc is incredibly rushed, the whole Dao Arc is greatly rushed but the ending takes the cake. When I finished it, I was already fed up with the whole story being rushed that I only sighed in relief for the novel finally ending.MC and his cheat,Plain MC. Good aligned. Not smart, the only time he is shown smart is by making the other character become dumb. His cheat allows him to absorb energy from any Marital Art resource like a herb or a pill, and once he has enough energy he can perfectly level up to the peak of the next level of Cultivation. He never puts any effort into Cultivation. And since he perfectly levels up to the peak of Cultivation, he is also always strongest in his current realm.Cultivation System,Cultivation System is not particularly unique, but quite descriptive. Seems like Author put a lot of thought into describing each stage and the process of Cultivation. But it doesn't mean much when MC's cheat straight up ignores every picularity of the Cultivation Realm and just levels up to the peak of the next realm. The final Cultivation realm had a unique idea, it's basically mastering the Origin of the World and then travelling to other world to master their Cultivation System and their unique Origin, but that also wasn't explored much because of the rushed ending.Overall,This novel was a Disappointment. It's a cliche novel with nothing unique to it. And it looks like Author was trying to end it after the first half, the novel after the first 50% is incredibly rushed.

SPOILERS BELOW!!!!!!!    Well I enjoy the premise of the story and I quite like Samuel as a character. However I feel it would have been better for him to wait awhile to atleast settle down and actually enjoy having a “father”&”mother” etc. In the first 30 chapters alone he’s gone from being blind to adopted to straight publishing a book now talking about starting a company, it feels very rushed especially considering he’s only been adopted for 1-3months (inc mini timeskip’s) that’s also not considering the fact he’s 10 years old. Well just thought I’d give my opinion i enjoyed what I have read so far.

you took the first few chapters from another book and then ruined it after chapter 9, first you changed the character of the protagonist, then you made him a virgin again. you ruined the whole thing.

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Its pretty good and has a little potentialIm not really sure what to say about it but the creativity is decently so I hope you can continue

Despite the fact that English is not the native language of the author, the novel is easily understandable, well written and quite fun! Start is a little slow but the characters are very interesting and the MC is relatable. Props to this author!

Pretty good concept, the grammar is proper as well. I like the dialogues and lines used in different places- Look forward to what happens next. Best of luckk!