Please please for all things good in life get a new editor. I am still trying to read it however it is very very difficult. If you edited yourself my apologies, please hire an editor. I feel this story has potential to be good. Which is why I am suffering through trying to make sense of it. But, it mentally hurts and it takes away from the story. It has taken me 2 days to read 29 chapters just because I have to mentally edit and re read for anything to make sense.
I’m a little over 500 chapters in and I really liked how they how to handle how he has home world and they don’t really talk about it anymore and it’s kind of like why because it was really cool I can’t why don’t you want the main character to be doing a bunch of stuff and like developing like his world at the same time I think that be really cool if he has eight cards and he has any can get introduce other animals in there and so why doesn’t he like why why how come like chapter like 300 and 400 when he was like still in earth or something he has an upgraded it a single time since then I believe or maybe he might’ve upgraded it like once when he came there or something but it was a long time ago I don’t really remember but like he has all these cool things and he just doesn’t really use them properly like he’d condensed his armor thing with the world tree seed and I Think it wouldn’t really be that bad of an idea but like he should’ve instead planted it in his world because you can always find other treasures and stuff and like it’s just like there’s always things and sometimes it feels kind of rushed a.m. but I just don’t talk about the world enough and it be really cool if you know developed the app cards and his whole world alongside everything else that would be really cool and he also said to use that tree juice to put it on his eyes and didn’t clear the illusions like you have five of them he could’ve used four of them still pretty much do the same thing and it’s just yeah some other people said about the bow yeah they don’t really mention it anymore here so just a lot of really cool things that he just doesn’t use and it’s just kind of frustrating so it’s just why because they did more with the world he has but I’m not really sure Anybody would like tell me if they do that later on or something to be nice but pardon the spelling mistakes because I am speaking this because it takes too long to write and I’m on the phone so if there’s any things that are kind of strange it try to word it out properly
I enjoy reading weak to strong characters but having them stay with the same mindset from since the beginning of the story (Keeps underestimating themselves or whatever) completely ruins it. I can’t handle that for the whole half of the book.
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