The story has great potential, and I feel the author's hard work in writing this novel, the writing is fine, sure there's space for improvement like certain repeated words, you may use synonyms for that so on and so forth, overall I enjoyed reading I recommended this mostly to those who enjoy creatures thriller type of novel.
I would like to start off this review by saying that webnovel needs more novels like this one. Dark ruthless evil main characters. I am very selective about these kind of books because most of the time the "evil mc" is a antihero at best and a secret good guy at worst. However this book does it right. The book has shapeshifters as the main power of the world. Mc has a system and can power up by killing people. World building is enough to understand the big picture. The only problem I have with this novel is that ever time a new person is introduced the author shows the whole statuswhat shapeshifter they are along with the str, agility,int etc.... this happens even when the person is killed in the same chapter as the status was listed. At this point I have read all the way until the premium and honestly I won't continue this book. I'm not going to spend money to unlock a chapter when that chapter is literally introducing characters to the story and listing every attribute they have...I don't care about the whole stats! A name and rank is enough.... Such as. Name:ThomasRank:psudo-lordWish this novel was better as I said before we need more evil mc novels....sad day
I'm a fan of mystery, so this was my cup of tea. I love how the characters are described and detailed. I've seen some grammatical errors and I was confused at some times due to it, but I was still able to understand what was going on. I hope this story garners the attention it deserves, great job author!
Echidna : "You are from Eldia. It's a different planet, not too far away from Lugunica. Trust me, you are not alone. Thousands if not millions of people have traveled through worlds in the latest four hundred years."
Elita paced around the room, I know how females are and I know how males are, and yet this girl was clearly acting as a female... I couldn't shake the chills when she was acting pitiful, Elita thought to herself.
"Those suits are fine and all but wouldn't it be better to have something skin tight instead? We don't see enough guys wearing skin tight suits even though it's so sexy, why is that?" Gilly complained.
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