Mind Net

Dem! To think that you're hiding such good stuffs here. To our dearest author, thank you for making this delicious delicacy. To me, this novel has perfect scene transition/story development, interesting character design, and amazing world background. Truly, it's a good catch. Sadly, it's a new book... I was left hanging, looking for more chapters. Please update more and very very fast Author sis.

Not my type hahahahahhahahahahahagagagagagahhahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

first: I will say that the author of this work is a degenerate schoolboy. second: there is a constant mention of the Canon in the novel(I read up to Chapter 20). but the constant mention of the nirazu Canon was not correct (for example, Jasmine was found on the mountain behind the Xiao clan. for Jasmine there were no pursuers because she killed everyone, and the goddess received her own poison). third: why should all the characters be given the appearance of other people? the appearance of the characters has already been shown in pictures, and then in manhwa. four: too many Grand pianos. the behavior of the characters is not realistic, not canonical, and especially not like Chinese cultivators. the hero's actions are stupid and meaningless. the narrative jumps like a mountain goat with a mental disorder. as a result, this is not a fan fiction on a Chinese work. a mockery of a good novel by the hands of this author. still davlenie Japanese ****. only inserts from the original and the world itself are similar to the style of Chinese works, and so on and so forth. my rating is 2/10. did not put 1 only because of the original world of atg and ideas with the addition of bleach. the implementation of the idea is just terrible.

Without hesitation and brimming with desire to save his beloved wife and son, He gathered every courage and will and materialized to an energy so pure and white like a manifestation of Hope, channeling it towards his family.

"I think I have an idea," Gilbert remarked. "It's about the impurity in the pills or something... the higher the quality, the purer the pills become, and the side-effect would be less noticed."

woah this is getting more hype, cant wait for the tournament arc!

Xyrus:ano un dad?

"No, go ahead," Mikee said without raising her head from the book. Seth pulled the chair and sat. Back to Jana and Romina who is Hi-Fiving for their success. Maikah walked towards the table seeing that step one was successful now its time for step two. "Enjoy, I added more cocoa in it," Maikah said handing the cup. "Thanks," Mikee said taking the cappuccino. While so she caught a glimpse on the man opposite of her.