Question after question came and went pass his mind for few minutes. In the middle of the thought, he looked up to the vast blue sky above. Soon after, a small breeze blew past his face, making him unconsciously turned his head to his left. His eyes widen at the view.
Step by steps, her feet was getting heavier, but she didn't try to stop. Finally, the guts to looked back visited her. She paused from running and slowly turned around to look. The Durange tree was now nowhere to be found. Maybe she was already to far.
A good read, the MC feel interesting (it's the good old reincarned cultivator from the past, but it's not too much), the story is good, background story is well made.. .until chapter 102, where the MC go stupid and reveal his secret identity to everyone (until chap. 102: secret ship, mask, voices changers, nickname, ... And he take his mask of and say "hello love" in front of everyone ... )Sorry, but this was too dumb for me, hope someone read after than and can tell me if he grow back his branmin (and kill all witnesses) or if this continues 😓
Just a honest opinion. Story Development is bad. There is not much exciting story to it and it's very confusing. Characters just pops up with little to no introduction to them. It make excited what going to come and happen in the chapter and new characters would just add more things me to get confused about. How about when introducing a new god, give us a brief description of him/her appearance/behavior as well as his domain e.g is he/she a god of fire, god of water, etc. although it's a very small thing. Could've started with a better ranking system instead of just doing 2/12, 3/12, 4/12, so on and so forth... it looks too plain.. 🤣
story is good and the narration is also amazing . Mc is someone you can relate to because he at the start of the story is a normal person like in real world and he grows, matures and his character developes from a shy introvert boy to a capable responsible person who is ready to take the necessary actions
An interesting spin on a cultivation type story that almost doesn't feel like it & with a feel of fantasy on the side. I can't think of spelling/grammar mistakes as they don't stand out, if there are any. It's harsh and gruesome from the start but absolutely captivating trying to figure out what is go on without feeling teased with the lack of information or explanation. The 'personality' of the system is enjoyable for the writing creativity but I can't decide if I want to cheer for it or hate on it. It's a very well written style of a system. The MC might be a good guy deep down inside but there's some dark or gray spots that are easy to see in his actions.Very much looking forward to more.(there is some pretty steamy scenes for those that enjoy that level of culture)Knockout story
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