do you still write this its been 7 months since the last update ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Excuse me but I have fallen into your novel, now I'm leaving but first I want to tell you that it has caught my attention.You may probably be angry, so I apologize in advance.Well I go back to reading, cover this place so I don't fall again while I'm reading.
Story so far is pretty meh, but the translator sucks, got to chapter where he's buying a weapon and the translator is switching freely between the word knife, sabre and longsword, like they're all the same thing, in one paragraph the same weapon was called both a knife and a longsword.If the translator is too inept at the English language that they can't get the weapons right, they have no business charging for translations, god knows what sort of other mistakes they make.
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
No book is perfect, and i am here to read so the book is nice and well written. After the first chapter the Author got better and better the Author also asks for help yet i have seen noone answer once. My suggestion in this review would be to add more back story on the game, cause his Real Life has some aspects that you think a future would have.
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