Maou no Musume wa Sekai Saikyou Dakedo Hikineet! ~Haikyoukai ni Hikikomottetara Megami-sama toshite Shinkou saremashita~

The writer sounds like he knows the general storyline already, because the synopsis is basically begin>early>mid>late part of the story, or it all happens early xDeither way i'm excited for it, hope it gets picked. but it won't, they never do :(

this novel has a lot of potential really, it's just that the translation quality is quite poor, ex. a skill name, in the same chapter it will be named differently, and the grammar needs some improvement also.. also that 3 year time skip is really so sudden, I mean all 3 years he's taming the titan bear? hoping for some improvement .

Finally, I managed to found a worthwhile farming novel to read. Love the HM reference for the chickens. Put a smile on my face. Keep up the good work. Just a note and you may already know this. The official successor to Bokujo Monogatari is Story of Seasons. The HM Lights of Hope is no longer bokujo. SoS may be another outlet of inspiration for you.

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strength:100(1000)=1100( note:the skill only strength up his strength ,so hp will not go up)

<p>Dari sini, seseorang bisa melihat bahwa jurang pemisah antara setiap tingkat Kondisi Peredaran Nadi sangatlah luas. Qin Wentian bisa mengalahkan Orfon karena ledakan kekuatan yang ia miliki terlalu besar. Tetapi jika mereka bertempur dalam pertempuran yang berlarut-larut, ia pasti akan kalah, karena jumlah energi astral yang dapat disimpan di dalam tubuhnya jauh terlalu sedikit dibandingkan dengan Orfon.</p>

Before my death, despite my wild nature and lack of piloting and driving skills I was fluent in many languages and as such in those white lines I could see words of two people or should I say stick men, speaking but the mixed in words of different color were strange to me and were all over the place, I thought that they may be words belonging to the sounds of some of the other drawn pictures but that didn't make sense, as the white words seemed to be going in one single direction, for example whenever one stick man spoke to the other, the words would leave his head towards the other stick man.

"O-Of course, it is my duty as a part of the nobility and a magic knight to help you in your endeavors of helping others from our kingdom." He said, staggering a bit at first, before resuming his composure. He delivered fluidly and with certainty like it was the most obvious thing and that I shouldn't even have to talk about it, despite the fact his slightly flushed face told a different story about how he feels from my compliment.