Magma through the leaves-naruto fanfic

Hello, new and old readers. I am writing this review after publishing more than hundred chapters. If you are a new reader, please come read this review before reading the story.On webnovel, I have read countless stories in which cultivators are described as all knowing, all powerful God like beings but I always wondered one thing.How can they know everything and remember it. Perhaps the author had created a world in which cultivators could remember everything but my world is different.Sure advanced cultivators are arrogant and all that but I took a different approach. I created the world in such a way that no one knows everything.Other than that, The main girls in the story have various reason for cultivating with the MC and they don't do it just because his handsome (though it definitely affects their overall choice 😉)Other than that, Don expect the MC to be over the top brilliant just because he is a ten thousand year old cultivator. He is smart and ruthless and is overpowered (so no young master can mock him cause I am tired of that.)Other than that, the story is fast paced and I slowly bring the world and character information as the chapters progress. You may not find much information on the world or enough character interactions in the first 50 chapters but it gets better after that.At last, I have to say that I can definitely improve and for that reason, I will not give myself five stars. Remember, this novel is not made for everyone.PS: If you read this entire review, you are a dedicated reader.

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I love the story so far and hope you will continue writing this novel and not drop it i can see this lasting a long time and I like how you made the mc op

As of now it's pretty much boring to read and the quality of translation is not that bad but not good either. Not much is going on right now beside a few world background info dumps and confusing things that takes a chapter whole that's irrelevant to the story plot. The first few chapters are confusing as heck. First he regressed then after 7 days later he transmigrated to another World? What's the point of regression plot if he gonna transmigrated anyway?

An OOOOOOOOP MCGodlike male that spread hormones and make females want to xxxx himSo far this is semi harem for me, there are lots of girls but mc xxxx them one by one after breaking up with other.Maybe in the future it'll become real harem when MC xxxx them at the same timeBtw it's a short and interesting novel hopes it'll translated fast

So interesting and tantalizing. I can't keep on turning the pages and see what happens next.........Surely I will recommend it to others to see it themselves and be amazed just like me.

I've only read the first 10 chapters so I don 't really have much to say at this point.The title and system are kind of misleading. I was expecting something chtulu related or some other eldritch horror kind of thing. But it ended up being a Videogame Shop system instead.The MC is pretty much a blank slate at this point. We have been shown zero backstory, background, or motivations up to this point and he pretty much acts pretty randomly though he's kind of an asshole most of the time. The thing with the chickens was pretty cold-blooded.

Hey, It would mean so much if you could read my short story and give it quick review and let me know what you think. :)I an aspiring writer/author and would really appreciate some feedback, so i could possibly write more stories or novels.