This is an absolute trash novel. Whoever wrote it doesn't deserve a mellow criticism but needs a good bashing. Overused plot, stupid mc and all the usual Chinese unsmart tropes.
Hahahah my harem story returns muhaahah hurry now reach chapters 21+. Its such a great story u can't help but love it. Men bow before me. Women gather under me. For i am . Lvl6
I like where it is going. I think the MC is a more paranoid than he should be after the bots are given by system so at least it should be fine for letting them do things on there own. Anyway I like the way you write and how the story progress. A bit of erotic and a bit of plot makes all the story more interesting.........Keep it up........ Author you have my support and best wishes.
Thank you for everyone whose reading this book, I hope you`re enjoying it. I just want to give myself a 5 star just to encourage myself to do better haha.
The writing us phenomenal but still need work on grammar and punctuation. Overall, the plot is well written and guides the readers to its intended outcome. I've read some novels with the similar premise, but they were poorly written.How do you feel writing a story that captivates my eye?
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