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This is bomb! Debbie update more!

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Here is my honest review!First is the translation quality: It's average, but the word choice is quite good. I enjoy reading it. It's good even if it's average.Stability of Updates: Don't know yet. This novel is still in trial read. We will probably get 14 chapters/week if this novel gets picked. Story development: The story is unique even if it's a system genre. I can't comment on that. I can't call it cliché either. The pacing of the story is good. Not slow and not too rushed. Not too much attention on details and you will have a sense of progression as you read the chapters. There are unexpected moments and you can look forward to what will happen in the future chapters. This is talented level.Character Design: Characters with personality. I like it. We also have character details. I know how the characters look. The author gave me just enough details. Very well balanced. The MC is interesting. He's badass, cool and a good looking scum. His personality is charismatic. You can't find another one like him. World Background: It's a modern world with cultivators and beasts. Yes, it's a very used world, but that's okay. This type of world suits this type of story so I don't have a problem. It's not a detailed world either. World Background is probably the weakest aspect of this novel. As I said, the novel doesn't focus much on details, especially not on world details. My evaluation: A super balanced story with very good characters. The author doesn't dwell much on details, but we get a story with a good flow. The biggest strength of this novel is the MC and the natural flow. A good balance between comedy and seriousness. Let's hope that the quality will stay the same even after the novel gets picked. Most of the readers will like this story. I can guarantee it. Not everyone though.I hope this review helped you understand a few things about this novel.Honestly, I feel like it's one of the best magical realism I've ever read on trial. I'm a fan of these types of novels.

what the point of update stability when it not even out yet...world fking back ground?novelty... by reading the title?i havent even read it yet...

Basing on the 1st Chapter, it really is interesting, it was really funny when both Owen and Alex talked. Looking forward for more chapters!!

I love it, grammatically is very clear and the feelings of the characters are very well portrayed, congratulations to the author for working on such a good story, the only thing I would like is that there were more chapters to keep on reading.Sorry if my English is not that good.

Dude its so good, like i have never i mean never read a mafia type fighting nove ………. The character development was on point, i mean seeing mayr go from school kid to taking on mafia boss was exhilaratingHope the updates are frequent

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