Luna's Awakening

So, I'll divide this review in pros and cons.Pros:-Author has an interesting concept going for him, especially in terms of MCs power and his hidden identity. it would simultaneously make a great slice of life and action novel -The familiar school setting makes it easier to relate to-It's worth it to pass time, especially when it's hard to predict the happeningsCons-The author's perspective is inconsistent, some lines are written in the past while some in the present, some active and some passive, though nothing that good editing can't fix.-The choice of words could also have been better but again that'll automatically get better with time.What's important here is keep experimenting, keep doing new things with it, try to create something completely original. As for the problems with language, they'll get better with time. All the best!

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The story was quite interesting, it draws you in and makes you want to keep on reading to see how it develops. Its all good until you start noticing the weird "pet names" they have for their enemies. At first you think they might be calling their neighboring countries BARBARIANS becouse the had a misunderstanding in the past. But as the story progresses, it goes from a posible misunderstanding to a deadly feud, and its not just neigboring countries its every country. RACIST TO THE MAX. If you want to promote nationalism there are better ways to do it without coming on as complete racists and xenophobic. But no, they kill off everyone else, they MC has the ability to revive everyone but nope they dont deserve it, not even the women and children, guess they are potencial BARBARIANS.

Honestly the translation is terrible.  Like I'm not even sure how this story is going on while others get dropped.  After chapter 60, it drops sharply in translation quality, and then it continue to get worse and worse.  The story isn't anything special, and the MC gets away with too much stuff, despite there being no reason for it, other than the people at the top protecting his because they are currently also using him too, just like he does with them.  The story could have been a lot better, but the author made the story super superficial.

With the completion of the novel, I decided to re-read from the beginning (again). Read up to chapter 762 (previously stopped at 1136), took a break for a few hours, and then BAM!What do you know--every chapter beyond 122 became locked behind a pay wall. This seriously kills the experience for every current or future reader. Lets do the math!1,901 Chapters total - 122 chapters free = 1,779 chapters locked.Let's round it to about 8 spirit stones per chapter.1,779 x 8 = 14,232+ spirit stones needed fully unlock the book....What? (Someone calculate how much money this is.)Okay, done with the ranting. Time to talk about the book so far!The translation quality is excellent. You might encounter a few mistakes like the spelling of someone's name is wrong or a letter is misplaced, but it's not often you see it. Great job!Stability of updates? Well, it's already completed so no need to worry about that.Story development! If there was any problem with the story, it would be the beginning. In most of the reviews you will see on this book, most people stopped around the beginning chapters. Given that there are 1901 chapters, it's pretty hard to determine when the beginning of the story ends, but if you continue to read, the story becomes beautiful and amazing.The issues you encounter in the beginning will not appear during the later parts of the story. What you will see throughout the story, however, are the exaggerated distances & measurements found in other xianxia novels. The author has a grand imagination--characters facing off millions of miles away, enemies 7 meters tall, traveling billions of miles in days/months. Seriously, how big is this world? You might get annoyed by it, so just ignore it and focus on the story itself.The power system is definitely unique. The only thing is that it's not explained too clearly so I will try to summarize it.Up to what I've read, there are only a few realms compared to other xianxia power systems. The power one holds in each realm is extremely wide apart, so don't expect the MC to break through 2 realms in one go. However, it is still possible to "realm cross" with weapons & treasures.Our MC, like many other MC's, is eventually able to do that.The humankind in this story are extremely weak (bottom of the food chain). Despite the power-ups the MC gets in the beginning, and how it can say that his power upgraded by 200% or something, think of it like this:MC Current Power Level: 0.1MC After Upgrade: 0.2Current Enemy Power Level: 0.5+(This issue only applies in the beginning of the story, so persevere! You can do it!)This is a story about how a human who traveled back in time after death, goes from a weak individual to a peerless being. The MC's rate of growth is exponential, so you don't have to wait TOO long until he starts trampling his enemies.The battle scenes are also amazing and great food for imagination. Some are just plain amazing. Lots of details in this book, so try not to skip chapters. Some are not relevant until hundreds of chapters later, so you might forget.As for character design and world background, they become good once you pass the beginning (I know, this is getting repetitive.)I can't express how much I love this book. Unfortunately, I have to finish it elsewhere due to the paywall. This is my first review, and I probably missed some stuff to address, so try not to bash me too hard!

There are only a few chapters, but besides a few minor mistakes in the plot that could easily be the result of forgetting what was written in a previous chapter, it can be seen that the writing quality and plot are well formed. The MC is a little dumb, but its on purpose in this one. Read the book if you want to know more!!

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it started well with RUNES but after joining academy it transformed completely into beast taming with no usage of Runes at all......WHERE ARE THE RUNES GONE AUTHOR?????