Lucky A secret Genius

Despite the flaws, it IS entertaining.-The grammar need some work.-The story is fast paced, and there is no clear goal for the protagonist aside from following the basic requirements of the app use. Chapter 3 contradict chapter 1 concerning the number of users. Not enough curiosity about the app, or the other users.Too much focus on the guns and battles. 1 everyday is pushing it too much, especially in the same city/area, and the lack of downtime, not even for bullets wounds. -The protagonist is lacking. He turned from an ordinary student into a mercenary with basic training without any reason. He became some capable of killing in cold blood and handle bullet wounds on his very first mission. It looks like it’s the same for the other app usersThe main girl is bland, and for someone who he is supposed to know for a while, their interactions are cringeworthy, like it’s the first time they are spending time together.-More physical description of the people and surroundings (especially the battlefields) would be nice. There is a surprisingly big bullet hole on a reinforced vehicle and it’s not described.

i started to regret reading this novel..its fun from the start "building a 9 story padogy only to destroy halfway" what a fucking heartless MC..how many girls the author need to break until hes satified whith his ego?lol... u can just type "im gay,NO girls for me"... you dont need to explain how he mince a girls hurt to pieces..NO shet man..... its getting boring...by the d way nice translating give you 5 star...for the story i can only give 1 star lol

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Why does the guy turn arrogant the first moment he gets power and he doesn't even know how his own world works as he is foolish to trust people and doesn't understand how one must survive as he calls everyone senior but gets betrayed by them at every second and why does he care about the others in the valley he should just ignore them and cultivate alone. He is also a cowardas he didn't dare enter the dream world for ten years so he is quite foolish

Good story,bt the characters involved should be more as it would bring more excitement, overall a nice plot with thrills jumping at each moment

Nice i love it and very interesting to read. If youre asking if this story was worth it to read yes it is🤣AHAHAHAHA.😂     

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