This novel has so much potential, but it ended abruptly. 😓 The author didn't let the me some find plot holes on the novel but, why did ended it too soon?! It literally left me hanging, though the ending is complete (no plot holes ). But, in the end it's too short. 🧐🤨😌
I like this book it good so far. I am a super critic about these books. and I voted for this book I pay for each month to read books I like but when. the site drop the book And I have to look for it on a other site for free it makes me question why I pay for this site?
Story is very cliche but a cliche I love, it's a little different with the whole choosing aspect at the start. I also feel like you updated too much too quickly, space it out with one or two a day so you don't get worn out or dry up the story, good work though
one of the best novels on this site. Unique and ambitious. Very well written. I think that the only reason it hasn't risen to the top is that it touches LGTB themes, and unfortunately many readers are very closeminded.
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My honest review of the story so far. (Chapter 39)Writing Quality: Below averageIt started off pretty amazing. I have to say the introduction was fantastically written. The writer must have worked really hard and gotten many references for its superb introduction. However, due to the beginning being so good, as you read past that, the terrible grammar that comes afterward becomes incredibly glaring. hopefully, the good introduction helps keep the readers from turning away.Personally, it's very difficult for me to read a story when I can't help noticing the mistakes. The main thing to work on is probably the usage of present and past tense. Grammar mistakes are abundant of course. Also, for some reason, the writer always write the 'i' for 'its(it's)' in capital letters.It bothers me.Stability of Updates: Five stars all around!It could be fast or slow, I'll give full marks. Personally, I am a quality over quantity type of person. So if posting fast updates compromises your quality, i think it's better to go at your own pace so that you're actually satisfied with what you write. :)Story Development: GreatThe story's pacing is actually quite good. they give you time to understand the characters properly before jumpstarting all the action. Thus we as readers are able to emphasize with their hardships more.Character Design: ExcellentI surprisingly like how the author wrote the story on the main lead. He feels like he has a lot of depth. There are many layers to his character, reasons for his aspirations, and believable obstacles to achieving them. I love a story of characters straying from the main path so it's a big plus as well.World Background: Good While it's not fantasy or cultivation, it's a realistic world that is closer to home. set in the poor area of the Philippines, it gives us readers an eye-opening view of how the poor area of said country actually works and how the people their are struggling.Conclusion:I think this is a really well thought out novel from a down to earth writer. While it may be difficult for non-philippine readers to understand some of the nuances (me included), it has a lot of depth and heart. Although I do hope that my dear writer really works on his/her grammar. I have to say I'm really proud of my fellow South East Asian writers :DAlthough I'm not Filipino, I'm a Malaysian and love my neighbors <3I hope we all succeed! :)
Story is very hard to read at least early for me, it's a combination of questionable grammar and sentence structure, weird pacing and unexplained concepts. It felt really hard to immerse myself when I had to reread several paragraphs a chapter to try and understand what's going on and still end up asking "what's this? What's that? When was that explained?" the premise itself is very interesting and has potential for world building and maybe it gets better later but I couldn't force myself to push through it. In all this is in desperate need of an editor.
some of the readers probably have brain damage cuz they spam the comments with stupid questions. like, DId’t h3 Hav3 A bRok3n l3G.when in the previous chapter that he got healed cuz of a level up
It's actually rare for him not to give in. He slaps himself out of the daze. he says softly "Artemis, sweetie I know. you know that training is necessary for everyone nowadays. It's neccessary to become stronger. Or you will crush under the foot of the strong."
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