The story line is an interesting one but attention to details is important. The authors brain was processing the story faster than the fingers could type it up and the end result is a lot of typos, and a name change a few chapters in and magically going from being in 1 location to another, back agai
Ok my issue with this story is the very inconsistent power scaling in this story. He is given certain abilities that should make him stronger everyday he uses them. Then a time skip happens and he hasn't progressed much or at least isn't communicated very well. Also its really unnatural that he doesn't have a relationship with the girl who keeps chasing him and very openly shows affection. There are 2 girls that like the MC. One of the girls shows a growing intrest in him and technically come to admire and like him. But she doesn't. The second one openly shows affection and later comes to deeply fall for our MC, but it goes no where. This is rather unfortunate its like the Author actively avoid it. Also there is strongly small amount of female hunters. And the reason isn't touched upon or mentioned.
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