Thanks for reading my book. Though I will give the problems on this book. Especially since some of them could be fatally disturbing.The Unsynchronization between the info on chapter 1 and 3: The user number on the AppStore is manipulated by the system itself.Chapter 37: It's really the biggest turnoff as far as I know. Well, tbh, I plan so the relationship between him and her could be different. Yeah, he still likes her and he would find a way to get her heart again. Don't worry though, he will be changed back as soon as the business with the Russians is over.That's all I can give for now. Thanks for reading this.
author really needs to work on making the narrative more compelling by doing more of showing and less info dumping! though the grammar is impeccable and conversations between characters are well fleshed out, I feel the story could benefit from more character depth, especially from the MC. Ortega seems a bit too basic to me ... overall it's not bad. highly recommend for urban lovers out there
Sexy novel author bro. Keep the chaps coming. I really like the concept of your story. And what really attracted me is your execution. I will review again after more chapters again but still the first case is already unique and fresh
A shameless author here.Experience the madness of a boy who lost everything and went crazy.Who loved and lost, join in on his newfound adventures as he explores the new world he finds himself in.
The King sits back to the throne and sighs, "This is not a good situation, if the words spread until out of the Palace, the people might demand the General to be stripped from his title, there will be uproar."
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