This is an interesting story to read indeed, for a visual minded person like me. The narration inside this books based on the most basic indications of what's happening around, similar to those in comic books.
But I tell you the story is interesting
Keep up the great work author! (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡
the premise is interesting but the weird narration then switch to first person point of view with past/present verb disagreement makes me lose interest. lots of editing to be done.
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But I tell you the story is interesting
Keep up the great work author! (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡