Author got to chapter 36 and decided "yeah, this is where I'll ruin the story."The MC's stupid mother gets herself killed, and then the father, KNOWING HE'LL DIE 100%, goes and does the same thing and dies pointlessly. Then, the MC and his sister also almost die and the LEADER OF THE ENEMY comes and says not to kill them or they won't have a work force. Horrible plot armor, even for a Webnovel. So lame. Would've been great to just have the mother die.Side note, the grammar is bad. There's a few slip-ups every few chapters, messing up entire words or changing pronouns.
For now this Looks really well but then again this a new type of take on the two world traveler genre. so Far iT is entertaining. Hopefully this gets picked.
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the noise and lies of the world paired with the blessing of rebirth, the chance for justice - a successful arc of suspense that makes you want more of it... hopefully soon!
I slowly move toward the door and slowly opened the door about an inch I looked outside through gap. there was no one outside but I still hear those footsteps.
"Hmm good good , i am your Drill master , i am a Major in Republic Air forces and i am your superior here , my name is Watson my call sign is HellHound buy you can call me only YES SIR is it clewar Warrant Officer !"
When I feel the hole is big enough, I push my body outside. I ooze out from the crack and part of my body lands on what I assume is the flat ground. Hmm, for some reason I can feel every nook and cranny of this dirt ground with my mushy liquid-like body. It's like putting your hand on the ground flat and get the feel of every grains of dirt and tiny rocks. This gives me much relief. At least I know some familiar sensation. For now, I can only sense my surrounding through touch. I'm deaf, blind and can't smell anything around me.
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