Not a big reviewer, but since it's relatively a new story comments / reviews help. The first ~65 chapters are very solid for a webnovel book, then it falls off just a little. If the synopsis interests you, the book itself lives up to it so you'll likely enjoy it. Interesting & well written MC, and FMC (Nyx - other two so far...eh.), great world building, etc. The writing is done quite well too, little to no grammatical errors. The downsides - romance leaves a bit to be desired, though it isn't bad, outside Nyx it feels forced, though it's still near the beginning so hard to say. Can see some silly tropes being used/setup as plot advancements, leading to the 'forced' feeling, imo. The second reason being story/plot pacing is inconsistent at points. Either way, worth the read.
story setting is good. but I don't like mc, who always think what he thinks is right. he is irritating to read. in some time he is cool and some i think why he is doing this. making harem for someone is cringe.
First and foremost, grammatical mistakes are miniscule if any. Second of all, consistency of updates and seems like author will not be given up on story anytime soon. It's a unique book and a rare kind to be found on webnovel. Not many book written by a female author with a female protag in a male body. While it feels like a basic fantasy template at first, it isn't any of that sort. While names are similar, magic system and fantasy world is completely unique to the book. I hope to see author and book shine more and improve.
Just finished reading chapter 34, and I gotta say, this story is freaking awesome. Love the pacing, the system, and the character interactions feel like real people!!!
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