Kurouzu-mura

Nice book, hooking characters. Enjoying this book. keep it up author

I wanna see how this story goes. Like I loved it soooooooooooo much. I'm a fan. A fucking goddamn fan. the story is so immersive, never has some other story been able to grab so much of my undivided attention, except a few.

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The overall work is pretty good but there is some things that it lacks to stand out. For one, your starting theme is very cliche in which the main character gets dumped by a love interest, which initiates the protagonist to acquire a special ability. In order to amend this error, develop a groundbreaking plot to draw in the readers.

Update the story please. This series is awesome although I have watched anime but I want to read this novel and this is not completed yet meanwhile anime is going to end this season please update it😭😭😭😭

It's a constant loss of brain cells reading this book, like holy ****. The story flow is choppy and unreadable, the constant missusage of he/she is a bother to read and the mc looks as brain dead as the story flow.

Honestly, I started writing this because I wanted the Author's badge but I have come to enjoy the world building aspect so much that I haven't stopped. It starts slow then goes really quick. It's suppose to feel like that. I enjoy giving the characters their "chibi" moments so it happens when it's appropriate to the story. I hope it's at least a good read on a slow day. Peace out!

This is a review of the first chapter.  The main characters were only introduced at the end of the chapter. Instead, the story started on a dark night with a duchess who was trying to runaway from home. The author skillfully used dialogue to give different personalities to the characters.   The story was in a historical mystery genre. The grammar and plot pacing was well done.