I read up to 78 and quit at 78. Even though the author said that he doesn't like girls who blush at everything, I read until 78 and there are girls who blush at everything and your understanding of romance is really bad (a girl with little acquaintance sees the main character while fighting and is affected. Then she kisses the main character without saying anything and has a happy ending) to say I would like the author, this is not rheumatism, this is a scene set to impress adolescents, I left it in 78. If there is such a scene, it exists in the future. Author, I hope you don't delete the comment. (I'm sorry if there are wrong words, my native language is not English)
It's a well-written story, and the main characters are satisfactorily developed, however, the number of chapters seems to be unsatisfactory for the author to be able to extract the full potential of what has been presented so far (until chapter 40, which is where I left off) . There are also some uncomfortable little points to read, but hard to imagine, like the fact that the protagonist has been a virgin for 100,000 years, or simply the age of the characters (the youngest so far is 400 years old), the protagonist is 100,000 and his wife 200.00... I can only imagine an elderly couple, even if they look young.In the end the story is good, the negative points are small and don't interfere with the experience, I just wish it was a story with a bigger development (and with more chapters!), but anyway I'll keep reading until the end, until now I recommend it!
The novel is amazin has a lot of thing going for it but the Arthur is so stupid as to leave such and amzing work and start 7 or 6 new novels that he didn' even finish all his work are incomplete the novel deserves a better arthour then him he failed as an arthour starting so many novels to not finishe them I have been waiting for over a year for a new chapter.
great writing so far. cool modern day setting. keep it up. i love system novels. cannot think enough for 140 characters jfkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkskskzisi
3 chapters in and i'm hooked 😍😍😍Although the story does at the starting feel like a lot of other novels, don't let that factor deter you from reading it. This story is much more than that. I am already in love with the other novel by this author and now that she has released one more I'm so excited🤩🤩Looking forward to how the story progresses!!
I like how the author executes the storyline as if you're on the water slide while you're reading this! So smooth! And that's because how the narratives are written so well that you will be directly sent inside the story itself. Yes, I mean it. As for the characters, I can tell the author put a lot of efforts into making them as realistic as they should. You can feel them as if they're beside you.What are you waiting for? Read this now!
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