Why did you stop writing dude. the Concept is pretty Interesting and the characters reactions are pretty nice. its kinda funny and idk man its a pretty great novel. i hope you start writing again. Anyways i dont know what else to say so imma just type till it lets me post it
INTERESTING AND UNIQUE!Though it's my first time reading a cultivator novel, I enjoyed it as I read the chapters. The plot is intriguing and the writing is easy to read. I also loved the idea, writing, character design and environment description in the novel. The synopsis is well written - short and to the point.The story is little slowly paced for me. The cover can also be made a little interesting. Apart from these, I loved everything about the novel.Keep Going!!
Comenzó bien, la traducción es buena y da ganas de seguirla leyendo Yaque te atrapa con la historia y los personajes, unque parece que le están dando todo lo op al MC no lo es del todo ya que todo se lo gana con esfuerzo y en Dominio de Dios las oportunidades vienen con los riesgos
He changes how the Mc normally acts when around love interest for example when she lives in his home temporarily she invites her friend to live with her he normally would have kicked her out but decides to do nothing. Said friend poisons Mc instead of killing her he just leaves her be with no hard feelings.
He was pretty sure that Jimin didn't mean it like this, but Jungkook wasn't the person to leave such a perfect opportunity out. His task was to make that broken look disappear and he was doing just that. He was staring into the boy's eyes so intensely Jimin couldn't help but release a heavy breath which he somehow held back till then.
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