It just needs a little fixing. In the beginning she’s crossing the street to get to the house, but when she leaves she’s using the same roof to crawl into her own bedroom?? And then it switches to she’s in school and has her own dorm she stays in??
For all new readers out there. I really recommend this novel for a good read but should be read first at wuxiaworld before reading at QI. And also, try to read the link below for more info:http://forum.novelupdates.com/threads/wuxiaworlds-formal-response-with-screenshots.43043/
Read a few chapters but was unable to continue. The grammar is atrocious. Sometimes the author completely forgets that "a" and "the" exists in the dictionary. Has a high rating but sadly I'll have to drop because my eyes
I don't often rate but this really is an interesting read. I like the world and the potential it has even if it might seem somewhat slow at this time. I would like to see where this goes and would recommend trying it because it doesn't hurt. I don't normal rate let alone give 5 stars
Not to toot my own horn too much, but I think this novel I've written is very good at making characters feel real... The ironic twinges of humor about their own situations is something that lots of people do, humor and tragedy are the same... The inky difference is timing and tone. It's also very morally grey, but not the kind a lot of people are used to in fiction.
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