Author please make some character growth for Lu Chen. I mean he is letting himself spitted by that bitch and his lover. And that dumb fatty is getting on my nerves. I mean fatty who is a rich kid is bootlicking long Chen without any background. And till this day I don't understand what that shrew had seen in this pretending to be moon light guy. In contrast MC is rich and devoted. If this harlot had said once to him about academics,then I am sure he would have done well in studies also. Just what is the problem of this slut to treat him like garbage.
This Novel is quite good but they should now stop spamming this this type of story.Story is interestingMC cheat allow him change his beast's bloodline e.t.cranking system in this Novel is quite ez to understand.I definitely recommend this book.
Name: 魔眼术士Author: 系统他哥AKA: Magic Eye Warlock on some placesI've read about 120 chapters and it's a mix of kind of interesting and not for me. Most of it is in the other world so far with only a bit back on Earth. The other world gets more and more detailed as it goes on.
Hello, Author here, This is my first time writing a novel so I hope you like it. I know that there are a lot of improvements that I can make so I would appreciate it if you could write down what I can do to improve the story and give suggestions for the story.
This novel is quite decent. Besides the most overpower MC starter package I have ever seen, Everything else about the novel is quite good.The MC is very hardworking and reasonable. He does not spend his time doing unrelated **** and always actively find a way to improve.The background characters are quite reasonable. Not everyone wanted to kill him and not everyone he fights with bear a grudge and people respected him when he strong.If you want a decent novel with very little bad cliques, hardworking MC, decent plots, and fast-paced action, this novel is for you.
This book is decent, The grammatical errors look non-existent and the story is starting at a good pace, The starring is quite mysterious, U think The reader who likes to read some mystery and gaming novel they would love this novelHowever, there are fewer details about the surroundings and characters
Starts out very ordinary, with bad grammar and little to no punctuation but the Author improves fairly quickly. The story has good potential and is very interesting.
The design of this world the author has created isbreally unique and refreshing take on "system like" novels with the main character's "book" and "reader" abilities he accumulated over time. While the "book" ability system seems a little confusing at first, it constantly is being further updated and explained in great detail throughout the story.The author does a great job explaining the world and the details when we need to know them to understand the novel. I was very pleasantly surprised with the amount of attention to detail that was put into this story, and appreciate the thoughtful consideration the author put into creating this world for us to read.I look forward to see how this story progresses for Leo and what kind of abilities he will get, and the heights he will reach. I hope we'll get to see him experience more roles as a "reader" in different and interesting worlds.
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