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It must suck to know the possibility of certain things. Like what's the chance of a condom bursting, if it's too high do you get another one? What if the whole lot is like this? If the MC has recently bought the whole lot, it could be bad. And even with low odds what is the chance of her getting pregnant or worse, what if she has a sexually transmitted disease? What do you mean the chance isn't a hundred percent that she doesn't? Ah yes, hereditary. Speaking of which, what's the chance of us being distant relatives? There are real chances of her being a relative of the MC, having an STI, passing it to the MC and getting pregnant.All this because the MC didn't go after a reliable batch of condoms. What did we learn? Always use condoms and get tested regularly whether you are active or passive.
he was introduced as billions of years old, cold aloof god. but he talks way to much, and speaks many unnecessary things, 15 chapters in his 'cold' charecter is already breaking, and the story is already progressing to fast, I would be surprised is the emperor of the kingdom came down next chapter. two peerless beauties were generated out of no where,, just cause no doubt for smut reason which also brings the story down a bit. but the main problems as I said are. cold personality breaking, story moving way too quickly, and too much unessarcary speech on the mcs part. oh and too many random long drawn out info dumps.
Although the theme itself is quite generic and getting overused from what I've read so far it's honestly pretty interesting and refreshing.MC for once isn't hiding his talents and although some of the parts that I've read are a bit cringe overall I was pretty satisfied from what I read. if the author maintains this level this could definitely be a great novel!Definitely pick this web novel!
I wasted hours reading this novel all the way up to chapter 149 just to finally realize the mc will never stop being a beta male cuck. If you don’t like novels like this skip this one.
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