It was really well writen i feel as thinthe begining went a little fast in some parts but the points all came through nicely overall great story cant wait for the continuation
While needing a bit of editing, this is a really good story. The MC falls to a schemer (not so sure he has the culprits right) and has to start all over. Previously, he was the No. 1 player in the massively popular MMORPG, completely maxed and a bit bored and waiting for the new upgrade. Now, due to sponsorship penalties, he has to earn some serious cash while hiding his new player identity (there are petty people out there...). I think it has great potential and can't wait to see what happens next!
very decent novel, it's not the exact same as other cultivation novels, but a few similarities, i hope that the author does make the character a bit more modern with retorts etc, but I Would say give it a read...while its free...
Really awesome. I couldn't find any problems with the grammar either. Hope I can continue to write cause I really liked this novel.Also can u make it such that the host is slightly op?The story hasn't developed too far so I wanted to see if it was possible.
This is quite a good story about a cultivation world. With good writing quality and story development. The characters design is quite at an average quality. But the stability of chapters release is bad.
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