Journey through the Worlds

Mc is dumb, dropped ch14. Needs to lay low and be careful since he says there are assassins who will attack talented youths. So he immediately goes and shows off his strength in front of the entire school audience. But even without that, he completely wastes his op class he awakened. Melee necromancer makes no sense. He legit just goes in and fights with melee while his op skeletons are sitting back doing nothing...what's the point of having the op skeletons then. His "melee focused necromancer" hidden class has no synergy with melee fighting so no, it's not a melee focused necromancer class, it's just mc wasting stat points so he can fight melee for no reason. Having defenses is fine, but getting strength so he can melee is a waste. Just because you have more stat points doesn't mean you should use them on someone unrelated to your class. It means you should use it to get more ahead of people by using the things you synergies with. You can either have melee stats and magic stats that are comparable to others or you could just have magic stats that are way higher. This is one of the things I hate seeing the most in necromancer novels lol, so a bit unrelated of a rant I guess. Basically, mc has some good op abilities but decides to not use them and instead become a melee fighter for no reason. He didn't need to, he had good skeletons who could fight for him.

i really like this novel, i haven't finished it but it seems fun and hot.the gramma could use some work thought, but in general great stuff.

Having read the first 20 chapters I feel that this is decent enough to be picked for translation (fingers crossed) that is assuming that the story continues in a good direction. There is a lot of room for the story to grow and for the MC to develop should the author put in the effort. Still it's decent quality for a webnovel

"Next time, come up to me and tell me when you want a hug, okay. I'll always give you one when you want or need one. It's okay Miguel," She said looking into my eyes with her finger tips crossing around my neck. I looked at her how her baggy eyes had made her brown sparking eyes hit the sunlight. I looked at her brown hair being pushed back by a sudden breeze. She slid her hands down my waist and wrapped me into a hug, I was close to her than I ever had been before, she had a nice, sweet smell and I wished this time would last forever. I didn't want to have to do what I had to. I open my eyes and see Chris behind me looking at her than us. The bell ringed, I hated it, I hated how fast time flied by. I wanted to stay like this a little longer. She pulled away, I pulled her back. 'No, no. Please don't go, I don't want to loose you. I'm sorry I didn't realize how much you meaned to me before. I wished I asked you sooner, I wished I asked you when we were hanging out and messing around in 7th grade, I need you, I'm sorry. Please, DON'T GO!'

talk or ... I got some beauty pills, once eaten it will maintain and improve the look for 20 years, the effect is multiplied for girls under 16 - Maciej with a bad smile

Even if I put something into the ass peach's hole, so long as a part of it protrudes out of it only the hollow is transferred to Kurihara-san. That said, the cord stuck out from the ass peach.

"Charge!"

i dont know how to write web novel or how to use it but just trying