JACK and JILL

Aside from a few minor nitpicks, this is a very well-constructed story. I dig the premise and so have added this to my library. The first chapter drew me in like a prize tuna, and I can't wait for the payoff.

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I genuinely don't understand all the hype around this novel. I've only completely read through chapter 22 but I randomly unlocked and read further chapters to make sure I was only right about the early chapters. This book is a mess. Its background is completely unoriginal as is the world. The characters in the starting village are completely flat and lack reasonable personalities. In addition to the poor character writing the story is basically just a list in chronological order of what the mc does. The killer for me is that it is genuinely unreadable as the author makes mistakes every sentence and nothing flows correctly making the experience jarring and unpleasant.

I don't read reincarnation books, but this hooked me!!!

<p>Perhaps he could have take this chance to see if there was anyone else manipulating her from behind… </p>

I sensed someone outside, "Come in, Warren."

I like how she doesn’t even blink about the I’ll see you on the moon part

Thanks for the chapter