I was enjoying this very much until you pull that soulmate contract bull****. For god's sake she enjoyed eating human brain and drinking his blood. If i am in his shoes i stay far away from her. And if you think the MC needs a girl why don't you just introduce friday or medusa. You could have keep their relationship as a business partner. She is not a FEMALE LEAD material.
I think that the story had a good starting, but the story development in the start and now is not stable. The background of the world is also not well described. And many of the concepts are added into the story, which makes it very much complicated to enjoy. The story has the potential to become much better.
This novel is quite interesting but there is one major problem (at least for me) this story is not a Harem (at least not until chapter 20 where I am currently )It is pretty deceiving because I thought it would be a interesting harem story with the stars of the 80-90, it is not. What i think the author meant by putting a Harem tag is That the MC will have many s*ex partners but not a "Real" harem nor will he have any Romance, and I find it really Unfortunate.
I like how they author explained the reasons for the protagonist overpowered abilities. Moreover, the fact that his sister held a far more overpowering trait than him made it good.It looked like the protagonist need to work harder so that he to avoid being surpassed by his sister, while the sister aside also think of working hard to improve herself wanting to surpass her brother.
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