I will start with what I dislike about the novel.1st - the switch between view points - I think instead of using 1st on supporting characters, it should move to third, so we can have an insight on what the other person is thinking.2nd - Too info-bumps, I forgot all the locations in chapter 3, and I think it first the volume zero category. 3rd - Clara is forgotten. What I like.The first kiss is well done.The pacing is good at my level, although slow on most parts.The update stability shows that the author is passionate about his book, and the possibility of him not dropping it is high.🔥🔥🔥🔥
@thatamazinggirl, dear author, are you okay? how are you? I hope you're doing well. its been so long n there are no updates from you, hope you r doing fine. Please update us on your health. 😥
I really love the character development and the plot as well as your writing style but I wish to know more about the world the characters are living in. It would be great if you add more world development in the later chapters and also focus a bit more on Eli's romance with Sara.
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