Isekai Kazoku Hyouryuuki - Fushigi no Shima no Elsa

Man this has got to be one of the best plot I have heard so far I the book title really aligns with what the story is all about wowwwww😳😳😳😳😳  you're good like really good keep it up and pls don't ever stop

The series started out with a lot of promise. It quickly (within 5 chapters) devolves into the most stereotypical example of a generic xianxia you can imagine, with idiotic enemies inventing nonsensical reasons to come after the MC and acctractive women falling over themselves to give him presents at their first meetings.The translations are good, but the story is utter garbage.

i think it was nice novel worth reading.i hope you can keep writting in future.would be nicer if you show or explain how pathfinder system works

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I like the story even if there are some spelling mistakes, it doesn’t affect the immersion. MC is cool btw 😎

He pushed me down the bed and rained my body with kisses. Some felt ticklish, some felt really good, and they sent shivers down my spine.

I already attracted too much attention for my liking.