Infigeas Online

The MC has great depth and has a good head on his shoulders and the world building is top notch. Normally for game type novels when the MCs are in the real world the story drags but this isn't like that. The real world moments are just as good as the in game moments. I just wish the author had more time to write more because it is that good. There are also some minor grammatical errors but if you look past that then you are in for a treat.

"I also want to say that...."

"What do you have to say Samson" Mr. Lyon asked.

"Papa."

Although im not a hig fan of the plot i still enjoyed the first few chaps but sadly i found a better novel so im going to leave the novel for when its complete

Its pretty good                                                                                                                              

I'm only 5 chapters in, but I'm already enjoying the concept of the story. so I'm going to leave this review, read it so far I haven't been disappointed, well, besides the tiny mistakes from editing that occasionally occur, everything else is great. ill reply to this review as I read on to show if my opinion stays the same or if it's changed.

Quiet an Action packed story this is.Review Proper,Writing Quality: There are some g-errors but nothing much to cause not to enjoy reading the story.Story Development: The prologue start on the bond between Gao and Aichi then someone mysteriously abduct him while they are playing? If I'm correct. This already set the mood of the story. Then the Dojo grad, training and fighting leagues, many developments that would not bored the readers easily. The skills too are precisely described.Character Design: There are two characters that the author gave detailed bg story, Gao and Yue. This could make the readers focus more on how there life will grow and develop in the martial arts world. As for the other characters, there intro were not bad and maybe we could also learn more about them in the future chaps.Updating Stability: I see from the notes, that the author follows an update schedule which is good so readers could know when will the story be updated.World Background: Written Well. I see no problems here.Overall, this work is already a great read for me. I would keep this in my collections and see how the the mc's will strive in the martial arts world. Great Work Author!