In the End the Truth Remains

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this story isn't good.YOU SHOULDN'T READ THIS NOVEL.    first problem:the translation quality.the translation quality is exceptionally bad. I honestly didn't read something translated like this since almost 10years(grammar errors, repetitive sentences, unclear paragraphs and more)    second: the story is not original.you might be thinking at the start of the story "wow so original, he was forgotten by god" or other stuff however this idea has existed long before in other critically acclaimed novels. Specifically "everyone else is a returnee". If I were to be honest about my feeling I would say that this is a mediocre copy of the previously mentioned novel with both poor translation and poor imagination form the author.    third: the saving grace?As mentioned in the title of this section, I still think that there's a saving grace in this novel. what is it, you might ask. well here it is : the unfinished state of the "game"this, for me at least, was a saving grace because even if the mc defeated a powerful enemy or solved a difficult puzzle he could get absolutely nothing.furthermore the interaction between the mc fighting in a world very real and the unfinished state of other stuff was most of the time enjoyable.    CONCLUSION:Should you read this story?No.Is this story absolutely trash?No, even tho it's bad, unoriginal, badly translated, it can still be enjoyable.I read this story and really enjoyed it who do you think you are to say something like that?Exactly I am nobody except for myself. Certainly not you, this review is ultimately only my point of view on this story. I would still recommend to check out "everyone else is a returnee" if you liked this novel.

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Shameless plug from the author, this is a rework of a former novel I wrote. Readers who read the previous version will find many similarities with the rewrite. While there is a new MC, a much older one Henry Riddle the gnome, will make an appearance in later chapters. You can find this novel here and on Royal Road. I hope you enjoy this novel.

Japanese beta shota Protagonist brain, he takes punches and kicks and blows to his body like it is normal and correct occurrence and maybe pleasure. Absolutely no control of his emotions and...I am speechless. I got angered for no reason reading the first chapters. What is unique or not so used is that, this is based in Nigeria(Africa)👍. You can imagine there will be fights in every sentence. The grammar and Punctuation are perfect(haven't been able to find any mistakes).

The descriptive setting is good, the author hooked me on the first chapter. Stability of updates is 10/10,an author that updates a book twice in a day! Recommended for those people are into steampunk! This is the first book I've read that has the subgenre of steampunk!

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"Gau Duzal! My name is Lotus Marsh. I'm a tome maven that master Hidden Mist Magic. I'm also a class B maven like my twin, Zangar." The man with a green hair said.