Important part first, if you can get passed the rough outline of the ending it really is a good book and is still worth a read.
Love the story and the concept, could tell he really had a good idea of where he wanted to go with it and enjoyed writing it. My only gripe is the ending, you can tell that he ran out of juice and it didnt seem like he was enjoying the process anymore. I really hope he comes back and rewites the ending at some point. The beauty of a web novel is it can awlays be changed and updated.
The ending clearly shows how he wanted it to end it, and it has a solid structure. But it does feel like it was rushed a bit. That being said it really just needs a polish. I plan on rereading it again, and I really do hope that someday he revisits this book to give it the ending it deserves.
I think he did, though not explicitly. I think it was when he said something about the only wish he cannot grant is the wish to change "him". I can't remember the exact statement and which chapter.
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Sometimes i feel he is 5-6 year old kid
So i drop it
Important part first, if you can get passed the rough outline of the ending it really is a good book and is still worth a read.
Love the story and the concept, could tell he really had a good idea of where he wanted to go with it and enjoyed writing it. My only gripe is the ending, you can tell that he ran out of juice and it didnt seem like he was enjoying the process anymore. I really hope he comes back and rewites the ending at some point. The beauty of a web novel is it can awlays be changed and updated.
The ending clearly shows how he wanted it to end it, and it has a solid structure. But it does feel like it was rushed a bit. That being said it really just needs a polish. I plan on rereading it again, and I really do hope that someday he revisits this book to give it the ending it deserves.