Not a shameless author here. It's probably very early for a review but since I have nothing to do, I might as well write this. Also, I want to make things clear. If you go into "see who voted" and see my profile, understand that it's not that I'm shameless. I was scrolling down my novel page in admiration for my work when a guy voted, I got too excited and pressed the "vote". I know it's a minor issue but still.Coming to the novel, I like to think that it's flawless but as an author as well as a reader I know it's not. The writing being one of the biggest flaws (which I'm trying to improve). Regarding the world-building, I believe it's more or less okay. If it appears bad, then it can only be attributed my not-okay writing. Understanding reader's dissatisfaction with main characters, I made the MC. He isn't a Gary Stu but he will get the job done. There are several social norms I would talk about in a sarcastic way. They are not to be taken seriously. Everything else is subjective. You like it? Good. You don't like it? Not good but I understand.
Short review of this novel is cliche OP mc cultivation novel, but this novel knows how to keep you wanting more althought you already know how it ends. This novel has good writing quality and less spelling misstakes than this review. Character design is little lacking some peaplo dont get enought backstory. Some on other become little annoying as novel goes on. Stability well its sadly finished novel. World is intrsenting althought lot of keeps missing because lot ended. Now the best part of this novel is big suprise when in comes to romance in cultivation novels. This is not harem. this novel has very good slow kind romance. This review doesnt give justice to this novel, but i neeted to write this because when i saw words END in the last chapter. I felt saddnes, happiness and empty. Novel rarely gives those feelings so i wanted give little justice to this hidden gem. ❤❤❤❤❤❤
the title doesn't match the story even if match those girl with system is just filler even the world are not written by her sister we never knew who the sister he the one who write the world why just be straight forward about the summary and not destryo the expectations of the readers..
The novel has a rather slow start but, trust me! It's all more than worth it! MC is a human who is reborn in another world in a none human body (the way how her race is chosen is pretty funny). She thinks very logically about every situation. She is accompanied by a system that is not perfect and may sometimes be proved unreliable making for an interesting dynamic between MC and System. The author is really good at describing things, places, and situations bringing the story to life.It's a good read for those who want an interesting twist on the system genre! Give it a try!
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