The language is often too floral which does give the impression of trying too hard. This is a shame as the plot is rather gripping. There are many language mistakes, too, especially a lack of knowledge of irregular verbs, but also missing words and word mix ups. Punctuation is lacking.
An incredible story with an emotional ending, how have we come this. Far with the BSP?! Cass you never fail to amaze me, you did it - you really did it.
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