Author with questionable amounts of shame here! If anyone is going to review my book, it should be me, right? Well, the writing quality is superb, the Stability of Updates is simply spectacular. I'm enjoying the Story Development and the designs of each character, and the World Background is awesome! In all seriousness, just give it a chance, this is my first work, and any interaction goes a long way. So read it! Recommend it to others! Leave a review and many comments!
Spent close to 6hrs binge reading all the chapters today, and it was pretty worth it. Nice writing too. if there's anything I really desire, it's a blood boiling fight scene
I can’t wait for the next chapters to be uploaded! This is so good! I just wish you can update more chapters everyday! Two chapters a day is not enough! I need more! I’m always left hanging!
Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?
The story was okay till chapter 80, but it just became the cliche ones right after, the MC who can't beat the people of his class yet cuz he's behind in actually experience and technique but they make mistakes like not taking him serious (ren 2nd rank lost against one attack) the two girls fighting each other or have the time to talk shit to each other when against a demon who pooped out of nowhere? and him getting a boost from nowhere like always? his gift let their power stabilize but what powers? like you can just give your mana to someone? no explanation on that either is up to the readers imagination, also WTH is with him making people believe in his words? or making people do what he wants? or him treating them as a chess piece? there was no such action literally a child asking for things and they happened cuz he knew about the future. it's worth 3.0 in my opinion no more than that. there is high IQ plays or plot here just magic and swords.
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