I Bought a Girl

Hi everyone!

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

Right now, I'm in a dark room. I couldn't smell anything, I couldn't see anything, I couldn't feel anything.

Wow! I am so impressed by your writing style, plot and characterization. Even though the female lead is not very confident at the start, the book captivated me. The grammar and writing quality is also very good :)

Writing quality, Story Development,  world background ground are all good

The author does a great job of bringing the reader right into the world of eerie elements taking place throughout Shouichi's return to Kurohashi. The writing is smooth and fluid, and it's overall incredible. No overly describing to bore out the readers, and just enough to satisfy your imagery.Well done author!

so sad, not my cup of tea, welp it's a good read considering the concept and all. if you wanted a main character who is a saint, this would be what you are looking for, I prefer reading about characters who are selfish and greedy...

writing quality = Awesome Story development = no reason to care for the characters beyond the surface traits due to how fat the scenes keep changing . There is almost no character development for any of the main characters, side characters, or the supporting characters beyond what little is written and that can be inferred by reading between the lines.character design = nothing is really known about ANY of the characters and the side characters to the point that all the cast feel like wet cardboard cutouts and not really matters what happens to them, including the MC.update stability = too soon to tell.TLDR- Very little is known about any of the characters. Pacing goes from 0 to 100 very quickly, and scenes change way too fast. No character building/ growth or reasoning of actions beyond surface level, which feels very forced and not natural.