I Am In Love With My Bestfriend

This is one of the best fan fics I have ever read, the plot follows the source very well while adding a nice spin to it. The powers given to midoria are really interesting and the writing/hammer are both very well done too. My only problem is that midoria is given new forms and abilities in a bit too rapid succession. Apart from that great work 👍.

this novel is absolutely amazing. i loved the bandit part of the story so much that i fell on the floor laughing. story is very well thought out and very well written. love this novel and would recommend everyone who likes fantasy and cultivation novels.

I like this fiction so far. It's solid. Character development is decent, story development is decent.I really think that this is a good foundation for continuing forward. Importantly, the main character stands out as vibrant and interesting.First, the narrative is ok. It follows a straight line of progress and in the first 10k written it did not deviate. Second, since it is a system-based world, expect the blue window and a lot of notification.I am looking forward to how the story pans out.

For just how good this books is I'm surprised it isn't famous. 11/10 would read again. absolutely amazing world building, great character development, and amazing story and high writing quality.

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|| This review will only be limited to volume 1 as I will wait for volume 2 to continue reading.|| Writing Quality [ 4 stars ]: It's good, but there are still a decent amount of grammar errors.|| Stability of Updates [ 4 stars ]: The release rate is from 2 chapters/day to 1 chapter/2 days. It's quite unstable to be honest.|| Story Development [ 5 stars ]: The story is interesting as of volume 1, the author did a great job at building the foundation for the main plot. Ellena's development is still too fast in my opinion as personality isn't something easy to fix, considering her past. Overall, the character development is not the best, but I've seen way worse. || Character Design [ 5 stars ]: It is good, but you can add a little extra detail ( like the point that is unique to that character ) to improve both the word count and sense of immersion in the story. || World Background [ 5 stars ]: Since I've just read volume 1, the world building only centered around 2 towns but it will improve later as this is still the early stages of the story. The world was built brilliantly by the author and the power of 'Ellena' actually went well along with the story|| Extra opinion: You should absolutely try this story out. I'm sure it will not disappoint you. As for me, I have weak resistance against cliffhangers so I will read after every volume is completed. Total score: 4.6

Before the neutral servants had any time to respond, a shout was heard from a nearby balcony.

As I stood up, I groaned and turned to see Fárbuati standing at the door of the tower, his back facing me.