Honestly, there are points were I noticed grammatical errors and issues in sentence construction but your story is promising. Knowing the girl was sexually abused is sad but knowing she can get better is epic. We all learn everyday and by constant practice, we get better. Great job!
this is what it is, and thata how it will be,
the foreshadowing was amazing but i kinda of got it since i checked the latter chapters, kinda crushed my own mood but whatever
there's also another novel i read similar to this:
Livestream: The Adjudicator of Death
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the foreshadowing was amazing but i kinda of got it since i checked the latter chapters, kinda crushed my own mood but whatever
there's also another novel i read similar to this:
Livestream: The Adjudicator of Death