TL;DR: It’s bad.The story is bad but the bad translation makes it even worse. The main character is also pretty stupid and other characters are also unrealistic. Futhermore the main character’s attitude towards other countries makes me believe the story will get racist in the future.Let’s start with my first problem. Why is the prettiest and smartest girl in class suddenly defending him despite having no relation prior? The main character even says they never had much to do with each other so why?She even chooses to risk her future to go to the same world for him. Obviously with more people going to the same world the more competition there would be. Yet she still chooses to follow him even after he ignores her act of kindness to resolve the grudge between him and a young master.He states publicly that he’ll ruin the young master and his family despite having nothing to do so (didn’t have his overpowered system yet). Seeing this, I had already see the massive plot armor he’ll have to save him from his stupidity.The body he reincarnates into is broke and his girlfriend is just ditching him. Yet he shaves and becomes a massive hunk immediately attracting a bunch of girls. They state he’s hotter than some models so why couldn’t the body’s owner be one? We’re given no further information of his previous life before he powers up to the strongest person on the planet in a second. It’s like the poor circumstances weren’t even there.The young master holding a grudge on the main character for 10 years is also pretty stupid. You’d think he’d get smarter being in a large family for 10 years. He apparently made his family stronger and is also stated to be cunning. His actions really don’t show that though.
I think there's nothing more to say, this is probably the best novel out of this batch of trial novels.This is the type of novels people are looking for.If I had to list the disadvantages, then it is the author's focus on sex. He's like a virgin teenager.Players go around having sex with NPCs as soon as possible.All NPC girls give away their body to any noble/mage NPC/player.Raped girls, murder girl cases...MC gropes a girl with mental power by mistake...MC stays in an Inn that is a brothel...MC gets info from a tavern that has girls serving customers with their bodies...the Chief of Magic Association has young pretty girls serving him in Tower.Every f girl is blushing and ready to have sex.ALL THIS IN 60 SHORT CHAPTERSThe spoiler is the reason why I can't give this story 5* even though the MC is a honest and decent guy. All the author thinks of is s*x and every next situation must be somehow involved with it!!!
5 stars from meTruth be told i just randomly decided to read because i was bored and looking through some comments on an event and i saw this, and so i decided to read it. I wasn't really expecting much from the start and expecting it to be like most other vr games iwas actually quite shocked. Also another reason for me thinking the novel is good is because i took the time to search it click it and add to to library and thats not impressive idk what is.
Awesome story with little bit different setting than other novel which i love as well bringing new prospects. Writing quality superb like it couldn't be better. Much looking forward to this and other novel as always.
If you keep on track with new chapters after you finish updating past chapters i think it will turn out great btw after updating the chapters the story makes me feel more personality in the MC it's a lot better than before. Hope you keep updating😁
A good fantasy novel! I read your own review and i think you are actually better than what you said there. The plot is good and the developments are amazing. Unique characters too! Good work, keep it up!
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