Okay. First, I would like to thank the author for putting in the effort to design an intriguing story. Because no matter if the novel is enjoyable or not, the impressions and reactions we tend to have are precious memories along the journey of reading.Honestly, this novel had tons of potential, but the author couldn't excavate it accordingly. The first two chapters alone set in motion a chilling past and a strong foundation for future plot progression. After, that the next 50 or so chapters solidify the 7 main girls who would presumably accompany the MC for a long time. Until this, things were acceptable. It could be reasoned that the author was setting in motion all the important stuff and possible plot developments. But then, the novel started going downhill. There are a number of things conforming this.1. magus ranks up to 'half-magus emperor' in the 'myriad wonder stellar chart' were very clearly explained in the earliest chapters. So it's logical that you would expect the MC to reach and surpass these realms within reasonable time frame, even with considerable fights, mysteries, character development. But even after 500 chapters, MC is still at 'One-star' Mage rank. In this case the MC's level progression is agonizingly slow, which is one of the biggest letdowns in my opinion.2. Throughout the entire myriad chart saga, nothing of monumental importance seems to be happening, so arch nemesis, no climactic fights, no forming of allies fighting against a stronger force. 3. Around chapter 250, MC enters the so called ruins. At chapter 560, the ruins arc is still ongoing, whose time frame has already surpassed his journey through the entire chart.But, this novel also has some pretty good points. The translation is decent, characters are explored in detail, not just generically forgotten like extras. Bonding between MC and his partners is especially deep and they grow along with him, which is admirable coz most authors in these genres make the Harem of MC flower vases after a certain time. World building is also good but only the 'wonder myriad stellar chart' has been explained in detail so far and the strory revolves around the beast factions.So, the main point is that the novel is good and has massive possibilities, but the author has to work on the pacing, which in my opinion, has been too slow till now.
Hello, dear readers! Alongside this shameless assessment by the author, I’d like to introduce you a bit more to the world of this webnovel. As you may have noticed from the beginning, the story starts on Earth, in a small town in Colorado, USA, set roughly between 2015 and 2020. However, this universe doesn't revolve around just one inhabited planet; there are many others you’ll get to explore as the plot unfolds.Supernatural elements are deeply intertwined in the narrative, featuring a "magical" energy called astral energy. The supernatural system bears some similarities to that of Lord of the Mysteries, though it diverges in essence, incorporating other forms of "power" (such as mages) and distinguishing itself in the use of potions in Lord of the Mysteries and rituals in Converging Horizons. I also plan to weave mathematical elements into the "magic" to create something more engaging and immersive.Soon, I’ll release a special chapter in Volume 0 with detailed explanations about the power system. Moreover, you can expect to encounter historical figures in this webnovel, particularly renowned mathematicians and scientists, such as Pierre-Simon Laplace.While the story doesn’t adopt a heavy tone at first (or perhaps it does?), it will progress in a dramatic and occasionally darker direction. My aim is to shift the narrative focus beyond the protagonist, introducing other compelling characters who will also take center stage at times. I chose Asher as the protagonist because he was meant to be the most striking and impressive figure of the era in which the story takes place.
These are things i liked and disliked in the story and I am in no way hating on the novel and author.• grammar has minimal error.• story build up was great. I was intrigued the most at the teleportation from earth to the trial zone per trial day.• having an AI or system is cliche but still tolerable.• huge turn off for me is chapter 31 onwards. it was okay to help your siblings and family but then they also could join in the trial 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄Still worth reading though. Amazing job Author! can't wait for more.
The story is well fleshed out. Our Mc strives to grow with each chapter. His personality is likeable(at least to me). The pacing is wonderful. The side characters' personalities and goals are well portrayed. Interaction between characters and their world is immersive. Minor to no grammar mistakes. Update stability is consistent without the loss in captivity of the reader. The author has a wonderful way of keeping the reader wanting more, from the storytelling to the cliffhangers and the various questions left unanswered. I hope the mc keeps on becoming even more overpowered, and he finds more meaning in life. Overall, a 10/10 mythos genre. Author, keep up the good work.
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