So far very good, the writing quality is great, no grammar mistakes either. I like that the MC is an actual newborn and not a reincarnated human too. Please explore the wild and prideful nature of a true-born apex predator.
During the days the sun was blazing hot, while the nights were colder than ice. With this wide range of temperature changes, it was no wonder that it was left uninhabited. Furthermore, other dangers also existed in that place. To be sent there equaled to be sent to a torture chamber. Maybe that would even have been more merciful.
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