His Unwanted Girlfriend

  • Genre: Romance
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  • Status: Completed

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  1. SolomonAdams
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    muah. I'm in love with this book. hehe
  1. SpiritImmortalMvH
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    good for your past time
  1. Artoriastheabyssen
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    Wow!! I love this story...
  1. mo86
    mo86 rated it
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    cute love story
  1. UIGUN
    UIGUN rated it
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    a good read...
  1. Nalum
    Nalum rated it
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    grammar issues, the story is entertaining though...
  1. I_comitted_arson
    I_comitted_arson rated it
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    the blurb needs more context if you want to attract more readers. another paragraph would do if you want to keep it mysterious.
    the narration has a melancholic tone to it.
    tense consistency is an issue, as well as the grammar. but with some editing, this will be even better. nice work
  1. godofchaosXTf
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    Loved the story
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