Heavenly Star Dragon God

This is my honest thoughts, I think your writing is superb but it needs to be proofread for grammar mistakes. Your storyline is engaging and full of action which keeps the reader glued to their seat. The descriptions are amazing!

The translation is awful ,this tranlator has ruined alot of novels with poor tranlation that you can get with a simple google translate. Translator 549690339. is doing this so when good translations come out they cant really compete with this fast cookie paced poor translation

Copy & Paste storyThere is another story with similar plot."guy gets system, gives letter, ends up at his master's place, tested, thrown off the cliff, love not allowed, asking others about what to do when in love etc..."

I kinda enyojed the story. Its true that it was a bit too slow paced but still i endure it and read till chap 365 but i couldnt continue. MC personality is something i dont dislike except of him being to discrete for too long but his simp side is something i could not accept anymore. At first it was ok but as chaps went by its increased more and more to the point chap 365 was my limit before puking so i had to stop. Still if you are okey with this 2 points, the story is enjoyable over all

please keep updating this story is amazing. I can't stop reading, great characters and very original story.🥰💫💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

From the word 'Go!' this story hits. FL's trauma is vividly portrayed and her pain is relative. I don't have much chapters to go by, but it looks like a promising book .author should hurry up and give more updates.

The second quest would have been a problem but Arnadus requested that he be allowed to handle that mission due his apprentices' ties with that group. Roland had no problem as long as he completes the Assigned mission within the designated time frame.

A few long minutes passed as Donbar ceremoniously emptied the magical bag of its contents. And with each passing moment Mei's eyes shot further and further up as the items he produced far exceeded the rucksack's physical capacity.