He Beat Up The Alpha

Gonna finish it this month, not much lefttt

I can’t handle the updates you have me too hooked I need to finish the book lol ....

Great story! How long is the story and how often do you update??

Well there be an update soon? Don’t leaving us hanging!

best bl I have ever seen! I can't wait to read more omg!

Hey guys, don’t know if you are here yet, but I really love this short story. Hope you will have fun here!

Good story line but last update was almost 3 months ago…when is the next update going to happen or the second story????

It could have done better. The whole point of harem genre is to grab beauties. I felt like the aithor started out great and then grew muddle headed. Maybe he was trying to attract a different wave of readers but why introduce a fem. Char as being super beautiful only to ignore her and walk away.

Point of Gilbert the lewd dragon was just ??? Teaching him a yin technique that can go awry if he doesn't control himself. Small things like MC being able to clear Bellinda's birthmark but it going nowhere.

i'll start reading this. i hope it has good action. that's all i'm asking.