Harry Potter: The Golden Viper

This never-ending moment make her hated herself more and more. Tears came out from the of her eyes, her body grew weaker and weaker, her consciousness fading.

rose: hubby tomorrow we will reach coast harbor and then we will be in flying ship to reach human country. I can't wait to reach the school. yess

"I'm sorry Hana-chan, I know how much you want to be Saito-kun's partner. How about this, I'll invite you and your partner with us so you can see Saito-kun!" I said gleefully while I shake into too much excitement after seeing her paling face.

And we could all use a little change

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

I know you are also a new writer and this might be your very first novel (well, same) but you are doing a good job and just keep up the work as you learn to execute every ideas. Let's create a novel that will drown the readers on our world.

Unfortunately every chapter is divided by "screenplays" that could be their own chapters. Lacks individual character development as well as world building, and proper plot progress's details. Can be at the top tier of kingdom building novels with a rewrite.

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