Haliel's Adventure

Great work don't really have much to say but this is a great book, gave it a 5 star because the read was enjoyable keep writing and never stop writing good job 💯.

update stories please ,I enjoyed the sequence of the story

The book is mediocre in my opinion. There aren’t much scene that gets your blood going. Xpxpxpxpxp pxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxp ppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxp pxpxppxx

I'll give it an opportunity because it's about my favorite genre, videogames. At least I expect every god to have a different goodhood or divinity.

Really liked the novel, i hope you keep giving new chapters meow. .

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I'll give the world background a perfect five. Overall I will say the story has a good plot. The writing style is ok but you have to work with some errors.  I am not good with grammar so I cannot spot them.  But I noticed some errors in capitalization. You willhave to work on that.  That's all! 😊😊😊Hope you will continue writing the story.