Hacking Eden

Daily updates commence on the 1st guys:) And things are heating up......

Hello I admire our story And I hope you keep adding chapters because I love this kind of main character where it's weak at first, but there's a clear possibility of developing again.And I hope you keep adding chapters because I love this kind of main character where it's weak at first, but there's a clear possibility of evolving again. 😉😉❤️❤️

Let's start with the writing quality. The arrangement of the entire novel can be summed as this -middle school writing. Grammer is lacking in each chapter. The lack of proofreading is evident and each chapter feels as if the writer is posting immediately after finishing. Sentences lack flow and the tenses are mixed up several times. An effort to increase the repertoire of the English language could help with that as well as learning sentence structure. For updates, bribing people to pay power stones for shorter chapters leaves a bad taste in my mouth. I'm not quite sure, but I do believe you could combine 3 chapters into 1 and equal a normal chapter anywhere else. Also in terms of content, the story has pacing problems and immersion issues. I am constantly being told information when the writer could use context clues and character dialogue. Or even in story events and responses.Which leads to character design. The side characters are bland and lack character. Some are infuriating and others are bland. The plot has several holes. Why is system so unhelpful? Is a personality really necessary? The school legitimately makes less sense the longer I read. Mass drug use and suicides should be through the roof in an environment like this one. Not to mention Quinn himself. The boy has been abused, abandoned, and ostracized for how long now? Whatever length of time it was he lacks any real mental trauma or issues. Not even to mention how he isn't desperately trying to avoid being in a lower position. His choices seem to be the those made by a sheltered person. Someone who doesn't know the world around him.Kind of like how I still barely understand the world or even the school. Things are barely described and the explanations feel like I'm reading a manual. Suffice to say while the potential of this story might seem great, the not so small number of problems plaguing this story makes it difficult to give a favorable review. Maybe in the future when the writer improves his mastery.

LoVed this book even with the exaggerations early on, I thought it was still really good. The way the author ended the books was tragic to say the least.

The power spike right from the start is just too much to keep this story intresting.  You may like this story if op mcs are your thing but I will have to,pass on this on.

Although for some reason the rating of the novel is lease than what it deserves, don't be fooled. You can hate qidian if you want to, but this novel when compared with similar stories in this genre (eg. Swallowed star) is quite beautiful. This is not a typical weak-to-strong story. There is no harem or ruthless mass murder. The story and scientific elements are comparatively better than contemporaries. The translation and the writing style of the author is of a higher standard than most webnovels, so if you don't find it an easy read, don't blame the novel. All in all a worthy read. It can drag a bit, in some irrelevant chapters discussing wines and luxuries, but it is a welcome deviation from cliched training towers, levels and cultivation tropesTL;DR : Better than swallowed star, a bit of a drag but worthy read

Read up to 216, everything before that has been absolutely amazing so far. But the drunk thing with zoe and ralph being in the same room naked for a night. No, just no. Im not gonna read some NTR bullsh*t. If it was a joke, most people didnt like it. Clear this sh*t up, say what happened, not all that I dont remember bullsh*t.

Sporadically released, no fixed schedule at at.. brother, you're killing ppl who loves this novel. If you're busy, just xomment on the latest chapter, make your readers feel close to you. I know, this review feels a little bit personal because for the novel itself, i loved it, even i re read it multiple times. So.. please don't kill our spirit and gype of this novel. And dont leave us alone in the dark, occationally popping up on thr comments would be fine. I doubt it would cost you a few minutes. Thanks udong, whatever difficulties you have on RL, i hope you could overcome it really soon