Gravitation: The Novel

My honest opinion and what I noticed, the story has minimal errors in terms of writing, it doesn't get in the way of reading, the release of a week can bother some, but due to the quality of the story, it's not possible to remove the merit just because of the capitols delay (I prefer quality over quantity). The narrative isn't bad, it's good. And about the story, volume 1 was pretty standard, nothing special that I remember, but volume 2, I thought it was very good, it was wonderful. But as everything that goes up will also have to come down, we arrived at volume 3 which is horrible and dark, not because of the writing but the course that the story took, and instead of the author changing the course he continued, if you don't believe me can you read the comments on the chapters of the third volume, do you want the reasons? The protagonist's behavior becomes irrational and a new character is as useful as Sakura.People can come and say that volume 3 is to develop the character, yes, but you don't develop a character by irritating your reader, quite the opposite, you have to develop it by making your reader feel empathy for the protagonist and not anger. But it's no use saying that the protagonist had his reasons, the reasons are not clear for several capitolos making their attitudes irrational, doing things that normal people wouldn't do.

The concept is interesting, the MC gets turned into a soulless object, not that soulless though. Never seen anything in that direction but I really enjoyed it. It feels interesting and somewhat fresh. But I feel like there are some other words you can use or typos but that's just a tweak for someone like me. I like the story and hope you will not stop writing!

Raw title: 突然成仙了怎么办Status: 681 Chapters (Ongoing)............................................................................................................................................

Looking good so far. Was motivated to start reading by the reviews of fans who have read up to 278 chapters. They sounded so excited, I got hooked.Premise is kind of the same as other novels and female lead's description of unparalleled beauty has been done by others as well but I am a sucker for male lead falling in love first. :-)

In the underground tunnel.

" Is that so?" said Nix." Well Asuras are arrogen and dragons are prideful. Humans has fast growth rate but they have limits and dragon's has infinite potential they have strong body, fast regeneration, if they are strong enough they are immortal, they can be killed but they don't die in the flow of times.

"No, it's war, and to win a war we have to take risks," Kallen said. "We can't keep playing it safe, not if we actually want to win. You said you'd stop trying to pamper me, was that a lie?"

"Fine." groaned Ryuk. "What do you want me to do?"